This is the last story related to yesterday's diary.

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This time, I read back "The level of support for "LGBT" is too high" as an absolute primary resource.

However, as at that time, I was troubled by the "difficulty of reading" of this sentence.

I couldn't get into the "content" because the "sentence structure" was so bad.

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In the first place, I feel a strong sense of discomfort in calling this sentence a "paper".

If this is a "paper", then "I" is too pitiful.

I think that paper is

"A statement of a hypothesis, evidence, objective data (or calculations), and the logical conclusions to be drawn from them"

And the process of writing a paper is that

- I am severely (but logically) criticized by the peer reviewers.

- I have to go through all the reviews and calculations again and again.

- the paper isn't accepted.

- I repost it repeatedly

- I finally get permission to publish it.

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So, this is my suggestion to the author of this article.

Once, about the contents released at "Shincho 45", you received proper dissertation guidance at universities etc. and how about submitting it as a "peer-reviewed paper" to a domestic academic society?

Regardless of the person's thoughts, the academic society will accept the dissertation (or rather, it must be accepted) as long as it forms the body of the dissertation.

If there is a part where it is not clear whether the person is subjective or objective, you will be instructed to "specify the cited document".

It's a hassle, but it's safe.

If the domestic academic society does not accept it, you can submit it to a foreign academic society.

I think you will need an English translation, but it is enough to outsource the translation.

If it is not accepted by any academic society in the world (I don't think that is the case), you can post an unrefereed conference paper and give a lecture at the academic society.

If you announce it in advance, you will be able to attract a large number of listeners.

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First of all, I recommend that you consult with the teacher who helped you at your university.

If you are rejected by an academic society or a teacher, please contact me (Ebata) as the last line.

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According to "The level of support for "LGBT" is too high" in Shincho45

- If I can read it in a proper peer-reviewed dissertation

or

- If I can listen to a lecture with logical content

I'm willing to help (it's true).