"I can tell if you are popular or not by your presentation"
という私の主張は、最近、学生さん達の発表(プレゼン)を見ることで、さらに確信が深まっています。
My assertion has been further confirmed by watching a student's presentation recently.
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- 暗記もせずに、しゃべるセリフを用紙に印刷してきて、それを読み上げているだけ
- They don't even memorize their phrases, just print out and read them out loud.
- 投影された資料の記載を、そのまま読んでいるだけ
- Thye are just reading the description of the projected papers as it is.
- 資料に図面がない
- No drawings in the papers.
- 説明にめりはりがない
- Explanation lacks verisimilitude.
要するに、聞き手に対して自分の主張ができておらず、そして、聞き手の理解を助けようという努力もしていない、ということです。
In short, they are not making their case to their listeners, and they are not making any effort to help them understand.
そんなヤツ、モテる訳がない ―― と、思う。
I don't think such a guy would be popular.
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I have told this story to my daughter before, and she criticized me a lot, so I will stop here.